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There never was a sound... by *Silvercharmed:iconSilvercharmed:



The caged bird never sang.

              You see, it was only a toy
              Wound tightly with words of
   l
     o
        v              (Though sadly false)
           e
                and    p
                             e
    (Impossible)             a
                                    c
                                       e
Soft drifting phrases
        That never showed you the
        Wild freedom of a True-bird’s heart.



                                    



                                                          Caged birds don’t sing.
:iconsilvercharmed:

Author's Comments

A caged bird will not sing.

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:iconsorentense:
That is awesome. I love the unusual format, and your phrasing's great. :hug:

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Love is putting your heart in someone's hands, and trusting them not to break it.
:icondruidchickz:
love it! its great =) gorgeous job...
it sings for the love of being free, but it cant when it isnt free... so random =D but thats my interpretation, cant deny it, cant prettennd... lalallala... *dawdles off* love it hon, you did great! =)

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:iconluminadragon:
I like how this was written and presented. Very moving

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I'm paying atten....... O.O shiny thing!!!
:iconseltaya:
It makes me think of a clockwork bird, for some reason, the part about being wound tight...also, using the typography for visual effect is a clever trick, some of my favorite poems when I was a kid did that...I just can't remember any of them. >.<

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90% of people...blah blah blah. If you're one of the 10% who laugh at these sigs but don't copy/paste anything...well, good for you.
:iconsilvercharmed:
lol thanks,
i plan to do more with the visual aspect of my poetry, im glad you like it.

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire
:iconsilvercharmed:
thank you. ^^

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire
:iconsilvercharmed:
No your interpretation makes sense and im glad thats what you got from it.
Thank you!

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire
:iconsilvercharmed:
Thank you!

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Come to the edge, he said,
They said: We are afraid
Come to the edge, he said.
They came,
He pushed them,
...and they flew.
Guillaume Apollinaire
:iconseltaya:
I do, I do! ^.^

Yay, it makes it more engaging to read for people like me. O.o

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90% of people...blah blah blah. If you're one of the 10% who laugh at these sigs but don't copy/paste anything...well, good for you.

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