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So you've never drowned before?
Well come with me love, and
I will show you a breathless end.
Stay still and silent my dear,
In a moment you will last forever.
Don't worry, it will only hurt at first.
Well come with me love, and
I will show you a breathless end.
Stay still and silent my dear,
In a moment you will last forever.
Don't worry, it will only hurt at first.
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*sigh*After much yelling and screaming and irritation i have decided to repost "Breathless" having taken it off earlier due to a misinterpretation. Sorry to those of you who wanted me to keep it. And thank you to those of you who understood the first time what it was actually about.
DISCLAIMER
I know how this sounds but this is not about sex. I don't care what your interpretation is, thats not it. I have nothing against poems about sex, this just isnt one of them.
This was inspired by an image i saw of one person physically holding another person under the water as they drowned.
The caption read "Is this your first time drowning?"
Thus the theme is drowning.
Tell me if it needs a warning.
DISCLAIMER
I know how this sounds but this is not about sex. I don't care what your interpretation is, thats not it. I have nothing against poems about sex, this just isnt one of them.
This was inspired by an image i saw of one person physically holding another person under the water as they drowned.
The caption read "Is this your first time drowning?"
Thus the theme is drowning.
Tell me if it needs a warning.
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Ugh. I've been half-drowned before and YES THIS IS WHAT IT FEELS LIKE and I absolutely HATED EVERY MOMENT!!!!! Great poem, though.
Although even innocent little Soren was wondering what was going on for a moment.
Although even innocent little Soren was wondering what was going on for a moment.